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托福成绩119分经验传授(2)

符亚恋   2013-03-12 阅读:556
   写作30。不像SAT写作,托福写作非常讲究文章的结构,所谓五段式作文:开头结尾,中间三段。另外每段的段首句都需要有一句概括性的Topic Sentence, 交代清楚段落的主要内容。 另外的话,托福作文就靠自己的个人知识储备了。但是利用“万金油”式的理由也是可行的。其实托福写作就是几个原则:1。结构清楚。2。语法拼写无大错误。3。能够自圆其说。基本上这三点能够做到就不会有太大的问题。 另外关于Integrated Writing,再一次提醒,不要用模板!!!我上次写作只有27,就是因为integrated是fair。现在想一想确实有道理,因为我用了模板,字数虽然飙到了350多字,但是没有把听力和阅读的关系理清楚。其次,我想纠正一个最大的误区:Integrated写作字数不是越多越好。OG说150-225就够了,我这次写了220个字,逻辑清晰。
 
  The lecture revises the idea presented in the text, that Rembrandt was not the artist who painted
 
  the famous painting "Portrait of an Elderly Woman in a White Bonnet”.
 
  The inconsistency between the white cap, which identifies the woman as a servant, and the
 
  expensive fur collar she wears dissolves as the Professor explains that the fur collar was
 
  apparently painted over the original painting to increase its worth by displaying an aristocratic
 
  woman.
 
  In addition, the assumption that light and shadow in the painting do not fit together is refuted by
 
  the fact that in the original painting, the woman wears a light cloth that illuminated her face. Thus
 
  the presentation of light and shadow was indeed very realistic and accurate, as it is characteristic
 
  of Rembrandt’s paintings.
 
  Finally, the mystery of the panel consisting of patches glued together is also solved in the lecture.
 
  Actually, the wood panel was later enlarged to make it more grand and valuable, but the original
 
  painting was painted on a single panel, as Rembrandt would have done it. Furthermore, the wood
 
  is of the same tree used in other Rembrandt paintings, like the "Self-Portrait with a Hat”.
 
  All this information points to Rembrandt as the painter of the controversial painting.
 
  分析:大家发现没有,这篇满分文有两个特点:1.行文简洁明了,没有模板的痕迹。2.每段以professor的观点起头,重点放在听力的内容里。大概就是这样了,能取得119的成绩实在是让我受宠若惊。总之英语能力的提升,就好比“冰冻三尺非一日之寒”,需要长期的积累。”

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